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thanks for the comments. snoink, not sure what i can say about your comment except i think "emo" is an insulting and poorly defined label. i appreciate your words, though. ...

Fingers of blood touch me from where I lie alone and wasted in a bed of white roses. I was not looking for you. I was not even singing your ...

do you have a link to that website?

Cassie and Jess spent their last days in a rundown motel room. Cassie was a young and beautiful model, Jess was a fadingly pretty housewife. Between the two, they had ...

seems needlessly wordy. i think there is way too much introspection here, even it is just a first part. i didn't find myself so fascinated by the narrator's thoughts that ...

interesting. cinematic. the first part with him in the shower was quite cronenbergian. not sure i can offer much more input at this point, but it's a good start.

I love you. I love you. I love you all the time. In my dreams, you’re with me. In my dreams… You’re with me forever, forever, forever, and it melts ...

thank you for the kind words.

considering most of the stories on this site couldn't be classified as true "short fiction" anyway, i don't find anything wrong with the length here. you told us your dream, ...

The mind expands. “Confused? Of course I’m confused.” “I will be there.” “I won’t be there.” “Which will it be [there] then?” “I can no longer accept the terms of ...

pretty cute, entertaining, etc. as far as dog stories go, but the shift in tone at the end struck me as somewhat abrupt.

Susan and Susan and Marcus : One night when her husband didn’t come home, Susan decided to drink fifteen cans of beer. Sitting on the sofa crying tears and drinking ...

She tells me she is disgusted with herself. We are walking in the field. She isn’t going to Wisconsin. Fuck that. I don’t, we don’t need that. I’m sticking here, ...

the dialogue is realistic, the situation is realistic, but i get about as much out of reading this as i would watching a lifetime movie of the week.

i wasn't captivated, but i think it's cool that you're asking these questions. unlike most stories on this site, this feels honest and personal. i like the idea of someone ...